Sumi H. Inkblot

Pan's Labyrinth , when they torture the guy to find out where the rest of the group are hiding.

He hated them. He hated how they would laugh, and talk of stranger things. He hated the way they would laugh it off if they tripped and fell, and the ...

OMG. YWS is complete. :D

*Moved* ^_^ I steal pie crust. :*does so*:

"Maus". XD But really, this sounds like that old movie -- was it "Cats and Dogs"? They sprayed rats with plague-ish guck and was planning to have them infiltrate entire ...

Regarding Jutsu If you're going to use " -no Jutsu ", try to find a complete translation, or else use "False Demon Wings Technique!" ("The Art of...blah blah blah") or ...

Chupacabra. :D

XD What's so funny? :P Colter likes you, apparently. :P

1) Has the story started to get boring yet? 2) Is everything understood better now? Are you still hopelessly confused? 3) How is my description? Where does it need more, ...

Harry Potter is one of my favorite series, if not for the quirky writing then for the fact they remind me of simpler days. The reason, I think, that HP ...

1: "Guahahahha" and "Huhuhuhu" are sound effects for manga, not for writing. You can just say, "she was out of breath" or "he laughed eerily" or whatever. Some elements of ...

Known for making us all lose the Game. (*lost*)

Hi, Jenna! My first comment is please space it up a little! It's incredibly discouraging to see blocky text, and easy to lose your place when reading. My second and ...

Hello, mohican! There's really not much here for us to critique: though I am quite interested. Elves who are not wise and vague and all that shiz! They might even ...

Hello, Nite! This is an interesting and well-written piece, but I don't quite understand it. Is it the first in a series of chapters? A stand-alone piece? I don't really ...